Thursday, October 30, 2008

DRAFT Position Paper

James E. Muellenbach III, CEO

As trends in North America start to grow, we here at Burger Planet need to change and grow with them. Americans today are always worried about image, especially middle-aged women who miss they way they used to look when they were younger. The time has come for restaurants, fast food included, to change their ways and become a place where people can eat healthy and not have to worry about putting on extra weight. With our new and improved menu, customers will now have the choice of our delicious originals and some added healthy bonuses.

With white chicken breasts and a fantastic selection of delicious fruit to choose from, customers can have a great meal while staying healthy. Three new gourmet salads have also been added for those who would like a light, hearty meal around 300 calories. Looking great and staying healthy is a number once concern of many Americans, that’s why we, the good people at Burger Planet, are making sure we add to the cause for a healthier America.

While we still offer great originals, people will be more attracted to the new healthy choices at Burger Planet. It will bring in new customers as well, who enjoy good fast served to them quickly. It is bold and smart move for to expand our menu and help people loose weight by having a choice to eat healthy and delicious food, but still being able to choose from our variety of items.


Kramer Young
Head of Public Relations
555-555-5555
max.young@aggiemail.usu.edu

4 comments:

Jessica Walker said...

Kramer-
This has a few grammatical errors you must have overlooked. The information is good and sounds apppealing.

Lacy Ann :) said...

Good job. I liked that your paragraphs are short but contain a lot of relevant information. You only say what you need to instead of dragging on.

Jo Olsen said...

I really liked the descriptive words you used. It helped create a positive image. Just a few grammatical errors. Nice job!

mckell said...

Nice job. I think your points were right on target.