Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Draft Media Pitch

Cache Valley Area Investors Association
Become Financially Independent With Passive Income

Vincent Broadley,

A local resident here in Logan, Utah has started holding meetings every other Thursday nights concerning how to quit worry about money and start doing what you love. Preston Parker has formed the Cache Valley Area Investors Association, a group, which helps people, become financially secure and learn how to live of passive income, so they can have a career they love and not have to worry about making money.

All that is required to attend these meetings, which are held at the Cache Country Chamber of Commerce, 160 N. Main in Logan, is that you are interested in being financially independent and are ready to stop doing what you hate, and start doing something you love, or have always wanted to do.

If you are interested, please contact me so we can schedule a meeting time as well as have you attend one of the CVAIA meetings. Thank you for your time.

Kramer Young
Public Relations Director
435-881-6328
max.young@aggiemail.usu.edu

2 comments:

npeters said...

Hey, good job. Like you said, short, sweet, and to the point. The only thing I would say is to look at some gramatical errors, but there is nothing big. I just noticed a couple of commas where they didn't need to be.

R. Craig Morris said...

I was just going to second the commmas comment, just a couple unnecessary ones. Great call to action at the end.